Question by hardcore.skittles<3: Is this a good novel/short story plot?
It’s about a girl named Willow who lives in a futuristic world (flying cars, etc.) and gets drafted by the government to become an Explorer and gets sent to a planet named Astra, which is 90% water(mainly shallow seas) with a few islands dotted here and there. She is lost, and alone, her shuttle having crash-landed and her navigation device broken. She meets the head Shaman, who is the leader of the people who live on Astra. The Shaman (named Zein) introduces her to the native people (who are called Quatras) and Willow ends up loving the planet and it’s people, only to find out that there is a rival planet who is trying to basically take over Astra.
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Answer by Team HarryPotter
I wouldnt read it but it is really good
What do you think? Answer below!
HMM that sounds a little familiar. Oh, maybe like Avatar. And maybe like twenty or thirty other sci-fi/fantasy books/movies.
The story is good, but I just dont like the alone part, make her have someone that accompanies them. And plz dont make it into a novel such as the lord of the flies
hm mm..that`s a good idea but from your plot, i still didn`t find any desire to read it more…sorry.but you can make it more fantasy and shocking the reader.