Jim,
I like this one except that you use the same image movement for the first (Longest) half of it. It makes me feel like I am swinging on a swing and this image is the one coming closer and going away. I like the over variation of the image and I especially like the last one that just freezes and stops. I suggest you mix it up a little more and use that last image again. I love the image itself and the poem!
Your #1 Fan,
Marty
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Dannys art work has to be seen in person to be appreciated. videos and photos do not do it justice.
Nice work. Beautiful manipulation of the words. Keep working light.
very nice work man! loved it! you have a great poetry voice! 🙂
This is great! Thanks for sharing!
Jim,
I like this one except that you use the same image movement for the first (Longest) half of it. It makes me feel like I am swinging on a swing and this image is the one coming closer and going away. I like the over variation of the image and I especially like the last one that just freezes and stops. I suggest you mix it up a little more and use that last image again. I love the image itself and the poem!
Your #1 Fan,
Marty